Thank you so much for sharing your character description of ANZAC Ted. I like the descriptive language you have used. The plaster across his eye is a real feature isn't it and shows that he was injured during his time at war.
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Thanks for sharing your Anzac Ted writing with us. I like how you told us he looks like a hero because he saved people. What a wonderful trait to have in your bear! It would be helpful if you mention what the task is you are sharing, eg: Were you writing a description about an Anzac Teddy Bear? Were you using a picture of a bear? If you were it may also be helpful to put the picture of the bear onto your writing :) I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Hi Indea-May,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing your character description of ANZAC Ted. I like the descriptive language you have used. The plaster across his eye is a real feature isn't it and shows that he was injured during his time at war.
Next Step: see if Logan or Zoe can show you how to insert the whole document onto your blog rather than just a link.
Thanks once again for sharing.
Regards,
Mrs B.
Hi Indea-May
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Anzac Ted writing with us. I like how you told us he looks like a hero because he saved people. What a wonderful trait to have in your bear! It would be helpful if you mention what the task is you are sharing, eg: Were you writing a description about an Anzac Teddy Bear? Were you using a picture of a bear? If you were it may also be helpful to put the picture of the bear onto your writing :)
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Mrs Ealam