Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Anzac Ted Description.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT2Ne6w-XI0V-Hl3gv6_Qf2Smwcbrm6_YPYmVCYmV9IfsGdrZjXolvhyPA2bafYIeGEPRg74uubkaeY/pub

2 comments:

  1. Hi Indea-May,

    Thank you so much for sharing your character description of ANZAC Ted. I like the descriptive language you have used. The plaster across his eye is a real feature isn't it and shows that he was injured during his time at war.

    Next Step: see if Logan or Zoe can show you how to insert the whole document onto your blog rather than just a link.

    Thanks once again for sharing.

    Regards,

    Mrs B.

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  2. Hi Indea-May

    Thanks for sharing your Anzac Ted writing with us. I like how you told us he looks like a hero because he saved people. What a wonderful trait to have in your bear! It would be helpful if you mention what the task is you are sharing, eg: Were you writing a description about an Anzac Teddy Bear? Were you using a picture of a bear? If you were it may also be helpful to put the picture of the bear onto your writing :)
    I look forward to seeing more of your work.

    Mrs Ealam

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